My Writing

One day it was the last day of school. I did not want to leave because Mrs Sio was my favourite teacher. I would cry when I see myself leaving, cause its like I have to forget the past and move on.

 So when it was the last day which it is, I asked Mrs Sio “do you want to come with me?” also Room 9 if they wanted to go on a trip with me? Next Mrs Sio replied “Of course why wouldn’t I?” so I said come on. So Room 9 said “ok just once.”

 A few hours later we arrived and Exodus said “come on.” So I told them to follow me. “But not on Tik Tok” I said. So we got to the pools and Mrs Sio said “I'm scared of heights,” so I push her off the cliff and I look away and you couldn't believe it. She did a backslap.

 And then a few minutes later she was trap and she disgorge in the pool. Sooner we got her out and she chuck me in the pool and my ribs were all broken and i went to Auckland hospitals.

 A week went by and I came out of the hospitals frustrated.